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Stupid Enough to Discuss by ~Lucky14:iconLucky14:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


Fist of flesh and eloquence
Funereal bone,
Psychosomatic willow tree
Narcissist on loan.
©2006-2009 ~Lucky14
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Stupid Enough to Discuss Cigarettes and Murder With a Stranger.

Must stop with the looong titles.

Anyway, only 4 lines. I started it and was going to finish it at a later point but never did so...

Makes sense to me.

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~FrederickNeeds Aug 14, 2006, 4:28:05 AM
it makes no sense but perhaps that is what gives it the abstract and beautiful quality that it has.

I had to look up what funereal meant. Thanks for that. I like learning.

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"If the English language made any sense, a catastrophe would be an apostrophe with fur."
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~Lucky14 Aug 14, 2006, 4:40:26 AM
=) Thanks.

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~shirakawa Aug 14, 2006, 8:50:15 AM
It doesn't make sense to me, but it sounds damn good. Modern and dark, I love it.
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~shirakawa Aug 14, 2006, 8:50:32 AM
It doesn't make sense to me, but it sounds damn good. Modern and dark, I love it.
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~chewwy Aug 14, 2006, 10:59:49 AM
i love barry scott. almost as much as this poem. it just sounds very grown-up - like a excerpt from a ted hughes poem, the meaning of which is too cryptic for me.
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~Lucky14 Aug 14, 2006, 12:32:54 PM
Haha, thank-you.

Bang, bang, Cillit goes BANG!

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